Writing

Not that long ago we have been making stories so here's mine.

The invisible man By Lola
One day me and my mum (Melony) were packing to go to a new house.  “Mum why do we have to move,” I say I’ve told you, Miley, we can't afford the rent, oh great I whisper. We pack the car then go to the new house it took quite a while to get there and guess why it's in the middle of nowhere.

Once we were at the new house (I mean cabin), mum invited my best friend Tilly over. We were sitting in my new room when Tilly said: “was your father nice or mean?” Then the flashback started.  I remembered him, we used to play and play he would drop me at kindergarten and would take me shopping.  But one day he died.  He died when I was 4 years old, I was so sad that day and I will never forget it.

Never mind Tilly says.  Then mum comes up, she says she’s going out for dinner and we’re in charge of the house, I gulp.  As she leaves she slams the door behind her and locks it we are safe for now.

Shortly after mum left we hear rattles down in the basement, we both gasp as we hear it.  Then we grab the flashlight and walk down the stairs, we turn on the light, it flickers then I realize something is wrong.

I remember the happy feeling of my old house whenever I would come home to a happy house but now everything has changed. I open my eyes to the basement, it is dark and gloomy and dusty, lots of things have been knocked over.  We walk back up but soon enough it happens again.

We hear lots of glass (China) breaking. When we are in the kitchen there is mums china cabinet, it has fallen over and all of the china is broken. Suddenly the stove turns on, I walk towards it then…

Two hands touch my shoulders, stop it, Tilly, you’re scaring me I say but I'm not she replies.  So I slowly look behind me and no ones there! I scream as loud as I can.  run for the door but it was locked.

Tilly runs to help me but it is still no use.  We hear the breathing of the strange person that we can not see.  It holds me up and throws me into where the china cabinet fell.  Tilly comes to help me up, we run to the basement finding old pillows and things to use as a fort.

We carefully climb into it and we breathe heavily.  It’s very stuffy in the basement but we can survive it I feel like we're being watched all the time, Miley, Tilly whispers, me too I reply suddenly we hear the old stairs creaking.

 It's coming we both whisper and we try to stay as still as possible but the invisible man opens the fort and we were never seen again.
The end By Lola